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The graph displays the amount of underground station passengers in London.

The graph displays the amount of underground station passengers in London. AjgYM
The graph displays the amount of underground station passengers in London. Overall, the number of people using the underground station shows fluctuation. However, the metro is busuyer in the hours from 6am to 15pm than the hours from 16pm to 22pm. The working day of underground station begins at 6am with exactly 100 passengers. A leap follows the hours till 8am, which is the peak of traffic- 400 people. The graph presents a slip back till 10 am with nearly 200 travellers. After that the number starts to rise, reaching 300 passengers. There is another decliance till 16pm, which is the lowest points with nearly 100 people. The line rockets again till 18pm with around 400 passengers. The number fluctuates in the hours 18pm-22pm with a bit more than 400 travellers at 20pm.
The graph displays the amount of underground station
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passengers
in London.

Overall
, the number of
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people
using the underground station
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shows
fluctuation.
However
, the metro is
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busuyer
in the
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hours
from 6am to 15pm than the
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hours
from 16pm to 22pm.

The working day of underground station
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begins
at 6am with exactly 100
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passengers
. A leap follows the
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hours
till 8am, which is the peak of traffic- 400
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people
. The graph presents a slip back till 10 am with
nearly
200
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travellers
. After that the number
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starts
to rise, reaching 300
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passengers
. There is another
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decliance
till 16pm, which is the lowest points with
nearly
100
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people
. The line rockets again till 18pm with around 400
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passengers
. The number fluctuates in the
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hours
18pm-22pm with a bit more than 400
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travellers
at 20pm.
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IELTS academic The graph displays the amount of underground station passengers in London.

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  American English
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