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The maps below show how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012

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The Two maps give information about the changes in Frenton between 1990 and 2012Overall, Under these proposals, Frenton changed significantly. However, Places of school and library did not change during the period In the beginning, in 1990 there were 4 buildings including(school, bank, hospital and library) located in tgw western side, in the eastern there were placed 3 main buildings, cofe and park. Buildings consist of theatre, shops and houses. In 2012, Many buildings has changed significantly. We can see trees were cut down, first blocks of flats and restaurant were built in the western side, instead of bank a place called "playing fields with trees" in 1990. In the Eastern side Second Blocks of flats were built. Next to this building Hotel and Golf Course were constructed. Cinema and Supermarket were built below the blocks of flats. At the end of the period flats developed next to the street
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IELTS academic The maps below show how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012

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