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the bar chart below shows the number of male and female spectators at five consecutive world cup finals held from 2002 to 2018

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The assigned graph depicts the number of spectators at World Cup Finales from period of 2002 to 2018. Overall, it is noticeable that the number of female viewers have been remarkably increased over the years. In 2002, the number of male attendes were almost 33, 000, which is three times to that of female spectators who were specifically 10, 000 in numbers. In 2006, there was slight increase in the number of viewers which was also followed by the following years except in 2014, where the depletion in number of men viewers were seen that is almost around 10, 000 counts. However, the number of men counts rose upto 40, 000 in 2018. The number of female viewers was surged dramatically over all the years. By 2018, there were approximately 30, 000 female spectators at world cup finales, which in comparision the count was thrice to its initial count.
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of spectators at World Cup Finales from period of 2002 to 2018.
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of
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female
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have been
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were almost 33, 000, which is three times to that of
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spectators who were
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10, 000 in
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. In 2006, there was slight increase in the
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which was
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40, 000 in 2018.

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was surged
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spectators at world cup finales, which in
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comparision
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