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The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville.

The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. ppWw

In both maps illustrate the basic changes which have taken in the Kimsville between the year 2002 and today. At all, it appears that Kimsville has become a much more modern city with far more factories and technology facilities. One interesting change is that a new train station has been built, to connect the new appartment with shopping centre. In 2002 there wasn't any place to live but a new appartment has been built near the shopping centre. And also there was another changes in place of factory there has been built software company. If we look to the south side of the city instead of the old cinema there has been constructed a pub it is a building in Britain where alcohol can be bought and drunk. The south-west of the city used to be a green area, with lots of trees, but new football stadium has been erected. Finally the city has been transformed much more than the past.

In both maps illustrate the basic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 which have taken in the Possible spelling mistake found.KnoxvilleHinesvilleLiouvilleTitusvillePinevilleRitzville
Kimsville
 between the year 2002 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

At all, it appears that Possible spelling mistake found.KnoxvilleHinesvilleLiouvilleTitusvillePinevilleRitzville
Kimsville
 has become a much more modern city with far more factories and technology facilities.

One interesting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is that a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 train station has been built
, to connect the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
Possible spelling mistake found.apartment
appartment
 with shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. In 2002 there wasn't any place to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
Possible spelling mistake found.apartment
appartment
 has been built
 near the shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. And also
 there was another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in place of factory there has been built
 software This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

If we look to the south side of the city instead
 of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 cinema there has been constructed
 a pub it is a building in Britain where alcohol can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 and drunk. The south-west of the city This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be a green area, with lots of trees, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 football stadium has been erected
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 the city has been transformed
 much more than the past. 