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The maps below show changes in New Town cinema between 1980 and today

The maps below show changes in New Town cinema between 1980 and today ox2XD

The two maps compare the difference of a cinema called New Town in the year 1980 and today. Overall, not only amost areas inside the cinema have been either replaced or changed position, except for the entrance and the ticket shop but some places also have had the changing in both of width and height. To begin, it can be clearly seen from the maps that the car park has been replaced by the decision of cinema’s manager. Nowadays, the drinks shop has also included food and shop was moved from the bottom right corner (from the entrance) to the opposite left corner where was theater 1 before. And the DVD store was replaced the position of food&drinks. In addition, the owner of the cinema decide to construct a relax room at the right of Food&drinks shop.

The two maps compare the difference of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovie theaterfilmmovie housedrive-in
cinema
 called New Town in the year 1980 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

Overall
, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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amost
 areas inside the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovie theaterfilmmovie housedrive-in
cinema
 have been either replaced or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 position, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the entrance and the ticket You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 places also
 have had the changing in both of width and height.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
, it can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the maps that the car park has been replaced
 by the decision of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovie theaterfilmmovie housedrive-in
cinema’s
 manager. Nowadays, the drinks You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 has also
 included food and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 from the bottom right corner (from the entrance) to the opposite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner where was theater 1 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. And the DVD store was replaced
 the position of Possible spelling mistake found.
food&drinks
. In addition
, the owner of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovie theaterfilmmovie housedrive-in
cinema
 decide to construct After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'relax' is correct. If 'relax' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a relax
 room at the right of Possible spelling mistake found.
Food&drinks
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. 