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The bar chart below shows the average water consumption

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The bar chart compares the variation in average annual water consumption in five Austrilian cities for last year and pie chart ilustrates the distribution of Austrilian water consumption fpr last year as well. In bar chart, at first glance, it is obvious that, residential water consumption in Perth was the highest amount of use around 300 kiloliter per property, while Canberra experienced low amount of water use about 140 kiloliter. About 250 kiloliter per property, residential water had used in Adelaied as well as Brisban. Sydney and Melbourne experienced 200 and 150 kiloliter per property water consumption in Austrilia. In pie chart, it is observed that, the most significant consumption of water was agriculture, which was 67%. while other usage of water were houshold, manufacturing, gas supply were near about 7%. Overall, Perth and Canberra experienced the highest and the lowest usage of residential water respectively. likewise around half of the water consumed by agriculture in Austrilia.
The bar
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compares the variation in average annual
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consumption
in five
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Austrilian
cities for last year and pie
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ilustrates
the distribution of
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Austrilian
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water
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fpr
last year
as well
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In bar
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, at
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glance, it is obvious that, residential
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water
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consumption
in Perth was the highest amount of
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around 300
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kiloliter
per property, while Canberra experienced low amount of
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water
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about 140
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kiloliter
. About 250 kiloliter per property, residential
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had
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Brisban
. Sydney and Melbourne experienced 200 and 150
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kiloliter
per property
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water
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in
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Austrilia
.

In pie
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, it
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that, the most significant
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of
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was agriculture, which was 67%.
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while
other usage of
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were
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houshold
, manufacturing, gas supply were near about 7%.

Overall
, Perth and Canberra experienced the highest and the lowest usage of residential
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respectively
.
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likewise
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consumed by agriculture in
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Austrilia
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