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the maps below show an art gallery in Australia in 1950 and now

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The map below illustrates the changes of an art gallery in Australia in 1950 and now. It is clear that the structure of the gallery experienced a slightly replacement with various facilities were added and modified. In 1950, from the entrance, a sculpture was placed in the middle of the gallery and opposite to a large courtyard. On the left hand there were three different rooms included café, temporary exhibition and bookshop. And on the right hand the structure was the same and we had early European, middle European and Asian Art. In the present day, the sculpture is still remained. But, the courtyard was reconstructed and divided into children art school, Australian Aboriginal Art and Australian Art. In the right site of the gallery all the construction except for the Australian Art are kept. Furthermore, in the left hand, the same thing happened compared to the right hand. However, the Café is now reconstructed and was split up a toilet and a café.

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changes
 of an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
art
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gallery
 in Australia in 1950 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the structure of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it witharcade
gallery
 experienced a You used an adverb ('slightly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('replacement') instead of another adjective.
slightly replacement
 with various facilities were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 and modified.

In 1950, from the entrance, a sculpture was placed
 in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it witharcade
gallery
 and opposite to a large courtyard. On the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
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hand
 there were three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 rooms included café, temporary exhibition and bookshop. And on the right You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgripfistpalm
hand
 the structure was the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).same, and
same and
 we had early European, middle European and Asian Art.

In the present day, the sculpture is still
 remained. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, the courtyard was reconstructed
 and divided into children You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
art
 school, Australian Aboriginal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
Art
 and Australian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
Art
. In the right site of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it witharcade
gallery
 all the construction This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the Australian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcraftprofession
Art
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
. Furthermore
, in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
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hand
, the same thing happened compared to the right You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgripfistpalm
hand
. However
, the Café is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 reconstructed and was split
 up a toilet and a café. 