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The given diagram details the process of obtaining a driving license in the US.

The given diagram details the process of obtaining a driving license in the US. xm1B9
The given diagram details the process of obtaining a driving license in the US. In general, it can be seen that there are three tests that need to be passed in order to get a driving license, which are, an eyesight test, a written theoretical examination, and practical driving examination. The first thing aplicant needs to do to get a drivers license is to register in driving license centre, and fill out the appropriate forms. After that, an eyesight test is required. If the aplicant fails he cant take license but the applicant passes this test, he will carry on to the 2nd stage. After paying the required fees, aplicants will take a written test and will have two extra chances to retake the test if they fail. Once the written exam is succesfully passed, a practical road exam will be carried out. It is fails the road examination, they can still get the license by paying the fees again and reattempting both tests and finally, if they pass, the applicants can get the driving license.
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the process of obtaining a
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license
in the US.
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, it can be
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seen
that there are three
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tests
that need to
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in order to
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get
a
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driving
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license
, which are, an eyesight
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test
, a written theoretical examination, and practical
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driving
examination. The
first
thing
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aplicant
needs to do to
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get
a drivers
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license
is to register in
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driving
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license
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, and fill out the appropriate forms. After that, an eyesight
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test
is required
. If the
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aplicant
fails he
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cant
take
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license
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but
the applicant passes this
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test
, he will carry on to the 2nd stage. After paying the required fees,
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aplicants
will take a written
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test
and will have two extra chances to retake the
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test
if they fail. Once the written exam is
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succesfully
passed, a practical road exam will
be carried
out. It is fails the road examination, they can
still
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license
by paying the fees again and reattempting both
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tests
and
finally
, if they pass, the applicants can
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get
the
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license
.
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