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London Underground Station passengers

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Through the graph it is shown the number of passengers for each hour in the London Underground Station. Hence, in a first analysis it is possible to conclude that between 7: 00 and 8: 00 and 18: 00 and 19: 00 are the time in which there are more passenger in the Underground Station. This result may be because at those hours in the morning and afternoon are the usual beginning and endings of working hours. Thus, it is expected that at this time, the Underground Station may expect the peak times. Following this perspective, the fact that at 16: 00 the number of passengers at the Underground decreases at nearly 100 people might be a cause that at this time, people in general would be busy with daily tasks that usually happens outside the underground stations. Thus, the same idea could be used to interpret why the same situation happens at 6: 00, however, at this specific time, instead of most of people being occupied by daily tasks, it happens possibly due to the sleeping hours and the very beggining of a day. Therefore, the graph helps the reader to understant what are the peack times in the London Underground Station followed by decreases and oscilations throughout the times on a day.
Through the graph it
is shown
the number of passengers for each
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hour
in the London
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Underground
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Station
.
Hence
, in a
first
analysis it is possible
to conclude
that between 7: 00 and 8: 00 and 18: 00 and 19: 00 are the
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time
in which there are more
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passenger
in the
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Underground
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Station
. This result may be
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because
at those
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hours
in the morning and afternoon are the usual beginning and endings of working
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hours
.
Thus
, it is
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expected
that at this
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time
, the
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Underground
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Station
may
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expect
the peak times.

Following this perspective, the fact that at 16: 00 the number of passengers at the
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Underground
decreases at
nearly
100
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people
might be a cause that at this
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time
,
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people
in general
would be busy with daily tasks that
usually
happens outside the
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underground
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stations
.
Thus
, the same
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idea
could be
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used
to interpret why the same situation happens at 6: 00,
however
, at this specific
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time
,
instead
of most of
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people
being occupied
by daily tasks, it happens
possibly
due to the sleeping
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hours
and the
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very
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beggining
of a day.

Therefore
, the graph
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helps
the reader to
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what are the
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times
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followed by decreases and
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throughout the
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6.0
Overall Band Score
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