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The chart show the the four different countries where per person emission of carbon dioxide between 1967 and 2007.

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The line chart describes the emission of carbon dioxide by per person in four different countries between 1967 and 2007. The chart clearly shows that in the United Kingdom, emission of carbon dioxide reach at a plateau under 11 metric tones still 1977. After that, it started to decrease and it was 9 metric tones in 2007. In Sweden, per person enmitted 97 metric tones CO2 in 1967 while it reached at peak point metric tons during 1977. It steeply decreased to 7 metric ton in 1987 Bihari emission of carbon dioxide gradually dropped 5 metric tones in 2007. Italy and Portugal for load same friend every person admitted for turns carbon dioxide behind it was one metric tons in Portugal in 1967. After twenty years, it increased to 7 and 5 metric tones in Italy and Portuagal. It was stable near the eight metric tons in Italy while it was slightly increased over the five metric tones in 2007. Overall, it can be inferred that emission of carbon dioxide were more in United State as compared other two nations.
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