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The maps below show a recent changes in the town of Kimsville.

The two maps describe the main changes in Kimsville city between the years 2000 to now. In general, it appears that Kimsville has become modernize, with far=>a lot more buildings and a range of entertainment. One interesting change is that the old factory has been coverted into a software company. In 2000, the area used to be full of trees, but the trees were cut down and replaced by new apartments and football stadium. In the west, a new train station has been built, this has made it much easier to get to the city center. A final changes is the old cinema has been knocked down to make way for new pub, so you can relax after a hardworking day.
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a lot more buildings and a range of entertainment.

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factory has been
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into a software
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company
. In 2000, the area
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to be full of trees,
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the trees were
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down and replaced by new apartments and football stadium.

In the west, a new train station has
been built
, this has made it much easier to
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get
to the city center. A final
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cinema has
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way for new pub,
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you can relax after a hardworking day.

IELTS academic The maps below show a recent changes in the town of Kimsville.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
121 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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