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The given line graph represents how many books were borrowed from 4 various libraries(West Eaton, Rye slip, Sutton wood, Church Mount) in accordance with 4 different months, in the meanwhile, the presented pie chart demonstrates the genres of the taken book from libraries.

The given line graph represents how many books were borrowed from 4 various libraries(West Eaton, Rye slip, Sutton wood, Church Mount) in accordance with 4 different months, in the meanwhile, the presented pie chart demonstrates the genres of the taken book from libraries. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the major part of books borrowed from Rye slip, however, it was replaced by the number of taken books from Sutton Wood. In the meantime, there was a slight increase in the number of both West Eaton and Church Mount. Biography and Fiction books accounted for more than half of borrowed books, whereas the least figure was Self-Help books. To begin with, the number of borrowed books from Sutton Wood started at 250 and exceeded the figure of Rye slip at around 275 in July. After reaching the lowest number at the exact 100 in August, it hit a peak at 300 in the last month (September). West Eaton and Church Mount almost had the same pattern over the given time. In comparison West Eaton, which remained stable during last two months, there was a slight increase by 50 in the number of borrowed books from July to September. Looking at the pie chart in more detail, it is conspicuous that Fiction and Biography accounted for more than half of all books at 43% and 19% respectively, however, the least figure was Self-Help at 10%. Science books were at the exact same number with History at 14%.
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that the major part of
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from Rye slip,
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of taken
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books
from Sutton Wood. In the meantime, there was a slight increase in the
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number
of both West Eaton and Church Mount. Biography and Fiction
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books
accounted for more than half of
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borrowed
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books
, whereas the least figure was Self-
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books.

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of
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from Sutton Wood
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started
at 250 and exceeded the figure of Rye slip at around 275 in July. After reaching the lowest
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at the exact 100 in August, it hit a peak at 300 in the last month (September). West Eaton and Church Mount almost had the same pattern over the
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time. In
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comparison
West Eaton, which remained stable during last two months, there was a slight increase by 50 in the
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number
of
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books
from July to September.

Looking at the pie chart in more detail, it is conspicuous that Fiction and Biography accounted for more than half of all
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books
at 43% and 19%
respectively
,
however
, the least figure was Self-
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at 10%. Science
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were at the exact same
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with History at 14%.

IELTS academic The given line graph represents how many books were borrowed from 4 various libraries(West Eaton, Rye slip, Sutton wood, Church Mount) in accordance with 4 different months, in the meanwhile, the presented pie chart demonstrates the genres of the taken book from libraries.

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