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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The given charts illustrate the percentage of the visitors of diffrent types of tourist attractios in Btirain in 1999. Overall, it is clear that the majority of visitors visited theme parks, museums and galleries while the quarter of them went to see wildlife parks, zoo and historical houses and monuments. Looking in more detail at theme parks, 38% of visitors visited it but 47% liked to see blackpool pleasure beach, 17% went to Alton towers, 16% visited pleasureland southport and the rest of them divided to chessington world of adventures and lagoland windsor. In the other hand, we can notice that 37% was the percentage of the visitors of musemus and Galleries, while less that 20% of visitors liked to see historic houses and monuments. Meanwhile, the leaset percentage of tourist attractions' visitors which is 9% went to Wildlife parks and Zoos. At the End, crystal clear that people prefer parks and museumus to histocial momuments and zoos.
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, it is
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visited theme
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, museums and galleries while the quarter of them went to
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wildlife
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, zoo and historical
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houses
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Looking in more detail at theme
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parks
, 38% of
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visited it
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47% liked to
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see
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blackpool
pleasure beach, 17% went to Alton towers, 16% visited
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pleasureland
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southport
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chessington
world of adventures and
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lagoland
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windsor
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In the other hand, we can notice that 37% was the percentage of the
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visitors
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musemus
and Galleries, while less that 20% of
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visitors
liked to
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see
historic
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houses
and monuments. Meanwhile, the
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visitors
which is 9% went to Wildlife
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parks
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momuments
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.

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158 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.