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The maps below show a library in 2000 and now. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a library in 2000 and now. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Dqow7
These two maps depict the alternations of a particular library over the period of 21 years from the millennium to the current, in 2021. Immediately, it becomes clear that the layout of the library has experienced significant changes, especially on the left and center of the given building; moreover, some facilities have unchanged by 2000. To explain further, it is clear that the places for fiction books have been noticeably smaller in size. As the result, several other kinds of books, including cookery, hobbies, and art are moved to the left-hand side of the library. Moreover, there is the introduction of the café, which has been replaced non-fiction types which moved to the right corner of the map. At the center of the building, three sets of tables are added. Finally, travel services, new books and services desk have remained in their original designations as in the millennium. In summary, there is not only an increase in demand for other kinds of books but also the requirements of furniture as the case of three tables.
These two maps depict the alternations of a particular library over the period of 21 years from the millennium to the
current
, in 2021. Immediately, it becomes
clear
that the layout of the library has experienced significant
changes
,
especially
on the
left
and center of the
given
building;
moreover
,
some
facilities have unchanged by 2000.

To
explain
further
, it is
clear
that the places for fiction
books
have been
noticeably
smaller in size
. As the result, several other kinds of
books
, including cookery, hobbies, and art are
moved
to the
left
-hand side of the library.
Moreover
, there is the introduction of the café, which has
been replaced
non-fiction types which
moved
to the right corner of the map. At the center of the building, three sets of tables are
added
.
Finally
, travel services, new
books
and services desk have remained in their original designations as in the millennium.

In summary, there is not
only
an increase in demand for other kinds of
books
but
also
the requirements of furniture as the case of three tables.
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IELTS academic The maps below show a library in 2000 and now. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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3 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
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