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The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These maps show how a bookstore was developed since 2000 until today. It is clear from the map that several items were added to the bookstore. According to what is shown, the left side from the entrance was changed since 2000 where it was for ficction olny. However it has been constructed to be an area for art, hobbies, cookery, and fiction where the area is bigger than in the center as before in 2000. In other hand, the cafe was developed in the southen area. In addition, there are many tables were added in the center of the bookstore to be available for customers. Moreover, the north-east corner was located for fiction in 2000, but now it becomes for non-fiction. To sum up, we could say that bookstore's services and appearance become more professional and better. Due to the fact, of adding extra table, and cofe area also, by improving bookstore's items.

These maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 how a bookstore was developed
 since 2000 until This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the map that several items were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the bookstore.

According to what is shown
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side from the entrance was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 since 2000 where it was for Possible spelling mistake found.fiction
ficction
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olny
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 it has been constructed
 to be an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 for art, hobbies, cookery, and fiction where the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 is bigger than in the center as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 in 2000.

In other hand, the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
was developed
 in the Possible spelling mistake found.southernSoutheysou thensouth en
southen
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. In addition
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 tables were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the center of the bookstore to be available for customers. Moreover
, the north-east corner was located
 for fiction in 2000, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it becomes for non-fiction.

To sum up, we could say that bookstore's services and appearance become more professional and better. Due to the fact, of adding extra table, and Possible spelling mistake found.comecodecoreconeColecafe
cofe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
also
, by improving bookstore's items. 