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The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the difference of bookstore layout in 2000 and the present time. Overall, the arrangement and locations of different genres of books are changed, three items remained same while an additional service is also provided. To begin with, In 2000, the bookstore was located in rectangular area where its entrance and everything was placed. Books about travel, new books and service desk on the left side of the bookstore. These three things remained almost same after passing through entrance. Furthermore, Looking at the changes made, there is a cafe in southern part of the store, and three tables and chairs are also added. The fiction section on the upper right side of the corner was replaced by non-fiction section. Also, the fiction section before, which covered almost entire section of the store, was divided by three genres like art, hobbies, cookery and fiction. At last, there is no rectangular area covering the entire store in now, as compared in 2000.
The maps illustrate the difference of bookstore layout in 2000 and the present time.

Overall
, the arrangement and locations of
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genres of books are
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changed
, three items remained same while an additional service is
also
provided.

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begin
with, In 2000, the bookstore
was located
in rectangular area where its entrance and everything
was placed
. Books about travel, new books and service desk on the
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left
side of the bookstore. These three things remained almost same after passing through entrance.

Furthermore
, Looking at the
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changes
made, there is a
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cafe
in southern part of the store, and three tables and chairs are
also
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added
. The fiction
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section
on the upper right side of the corner
was replaced
by non-fiction
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section
.
Also
, the fiction
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section
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before
, which covered almost entire
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section
of the store,
was divided
by three genres like art, hobbies, cookery and fiction. At last, there is no rectangular area covering the entire store in
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now
, as compared in 2000.
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IELTS academic The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

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