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The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Nectar: a sweet liquid produced by flowers Hive: a container where bees live Evaporation: water changing to gas

The given diagrams illustrate the life cycle of honeybees as well as the commercial production of honey. Overall, six stages are recorded in the life of the bees, which begins with laying eggs and ends up converting nectar into honey. There are five steps involved in the rest, from removal of the honeycomb to distribution and selling. The first step is when queen bees lays their eggs in honeycombs. Subsequently, larvae hatch in the following three days. They are then fully grown in around a week, before being mature enough to leave the hive in three weeks later. After collecting nectar from a wide range of flowers, adult bees carefully deposit it into their hives. Eventually, honey is formed and the procedures are able to recycle again. Turning to the honey production process, first of all, beekeepers detach the honeycombs from the hives. Once honey has been extracted with machines, the processed honey is boiled in order to get rid of unwanted bacteria. Following this, cleaned honey is then poured into several jars. Finally, honey jars are distributed to the public where they can meet various demands of customers.
The
given
diagrams illustrate the life cycle of honeybees
as well
as the commercial production of honey.
Overall
, six stages
are recorded
in the life of the bees, which
begins
with laying eggs and ends up converting nectar into honey. There are five steps involved in the rest, from removal of the honeycomb to distribution and selling.

The
first
step is when queen bees lays their eggs in honeycombs.
Subsequently
, larvae hatch in the following three days. They are then
fully
grown in around a week,
before
being mature
enough
to
leave
the hive in three weeks later. After collecting nectar from a wide range of flowers, adult bees
carefully
deposit it into their hives.
Eventually
, honey
is formed
and the procedures are able to recycle again.

Turning to the honey production process,
first of all
, beekeepers
detach
the honeycombs from the hives. Once honey has
been extracted
with machines, the processed honey
is boiled
in order to
get
rid of unwanted bacteria. Following this, cleaned honey is then poured into several jars.
Finally
, honey jars
are distributed
to the public where they can
meet
various demands of customers.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.

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189 words
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