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The chart below shows the results od a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The given bar chart is the result of a survey, which is held in five different cities in Australia. the survey is about the buying of coffee and tea, As well as the drinking habit of people's in those cities. Lets have a closer analysis. Lets start with the well-known city called Sydney. According to chart, The percentage of people going to cafe for or tea in last four weeks is above 60%. Whereas, people buying instant coffee in last four weeks is 46% and buying fresh coffee in last four weeks is less than 45%. If we see the barchart of Melbourne the percentage of people going to cafe for coffee and tea in last four weeks is almost 63% to 64%. But, the percentage of people who brought fresh coffee in last four weeks is 42% to 43%. Whereas, people who bought instant coffee is almost 50%. Brisbane city chart tell us that people who ent to cafe for coffee or tea are about 55%, The people who brought instant coffee are only 53%, The people who brought coffee fresh are below 35%. The bar chart of Adelaide city is all below 50%, which means that very few populations go for coffee or tea. But, if we see the graph of Hobart city the percentage of people who went to cafe for coffee is 63% to 64%. People bought instant coffee in four weeks is about 55% and people bought fresh coffee in last four weeks is about 40%In the summary, except for Adelaide city. The ratio of all cities tell us that coffee consumption is high in Australia.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results od a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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