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The maps below illustrate how frenton changed from 1990 to 2012

The maps below illustrate how frenton changed from 1990 to 2012 7QgA
The maps represent the change which were experienced by frenton from 1990 to 2012Overall, it can be seen that school, library and high street remained intact in frenton. Moreover, some more buildings appeared over the passage of time. To commence with, it is seen that in the north direction of the city, the playing fields with trees were replaced by the blocks of flats, while the area if hospital was enlarged in 2012. In the northwest, school remained same, and just below the school, there was a bank which was demolished and a restaurant was erected in the same site. Trees in the southwest direction were cut down for the construction of technopark. However, flats were newly introduced which were located on the right side of high street. Houses were replaced by blocks of flats while the cafe and park were changed into hotel and golf course. Moreover, theatre was converted into a cinema, and shops were developed into a supermarket located in the southeast direction.
The maps represent the
change
which
were experienced
by
frenton
from 1990 to 2012Overall, it can be
seen
that school, library and high street remained intact in
frenton
.
Moreover
,
some
more buildings appeared over the passage of time. To commence with, it is
seen
that in the north direction of the city, the playing fields with trees
were replaced
by the blocks of flats, while the area if hospital
was enlarged
in 2012. In the northwest, school remained same, and
just
below the school, there was a bank which
was demolished
and a restaurant
was erected
in the same site. Trees in the southwest direction were
cut
down for the construction of
technopark
.
However
, flats were
newly
introduced which
were located
on the right side of high street.
Houses
were replaced
by blocks of flats while the
cafe
and park were
changed
into hotel and golf course.
Moreover
,
theatre
was converted
into a cinema, and shops
were developed
into a supermarket located in the southeast direction.
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