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The chart below illustrates the proportion of the population aged from 65 and more in time period between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries

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The chart below illustrates the proportion of the population aged from 65 and more in time period between 1940 and 2040 in three different countriesOverall chart data shows the significant rise in population of USA during 2020 and 2040 japan and sweden are close to eachother from year to year and minimal changes can be seen. during 2000 growth rate increased in SwedenIn 1940 USA growth rate was 5% and remains constant minor changes can be seen which is just little from 1940 to 1960 growth rate dropped very shortly and remain constant from 1960 to around 2000 and started rising very steadily from 2020 to 2040 around 27% growth rate can be seen in population aged 65 and overFurthermore japan and sweden is account 7% and 9% respectively which rises from year 1960 to starting of 2000 5% growth rate can be seen and afterward it remains constant to 2020 and steadily rises in Sweden from 2000 to 2020 of 7% moreover rise in population of japan 15% to 23% and drop in Sweden for 3% and again rose to 25% respectively

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