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The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information. Writing Task 1 0Prq

The flowchart given below describes the method for university admission for high school graduates. Firstly, the student needs to obtain a high school degree. Once the degree is available, students need to download the application from the website and apply for a university or college. This application will be reviewed by the admin. If you got the rejection letter from the admin, your application has been canceled, or complete the application for an alternate course and resend it to admin. If the admin requesting more information, this is period is commonly known as Provisional acceptance. Then students need to compile the documents and resend them to the admin within 2 weeks. Secondly, if your admission has been accepted you will receive an acceptance form. Students need to fill the acceptance competition form. Then Students need to select the subjects, followed by registering with a Dean. After completing everything it's time to enter university.

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given
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describes
 the method for university admission for high school graduates.

Firstly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
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needs
 to obtain a high school degree. Once the degree is available, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
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need
 to download the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
application
 from the website and You can apply for a job or welfare, but you apply to a university. Revise: "apply to a university".apply to a university
apply for a university
 or college. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
application
 will be reviewed
 by the admin. If you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 the rejection letter from the admin, your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
application
 has been canceled
, or complete the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
application
 for an alternate course and resend it to admin. If the admin requesting more information, this is period is commonly
 known as Provisional acceptance. Then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to compile the documents and resend them to the admin within 2 weeks.

Secondly
, if your admission has been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 you will receive an acceptance form. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
Students
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need
 to fill the acceptance competition form.

Then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
Students
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to select the subjects, followed by registering with a Dean. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 completing everything it's time to enter university. 