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The line graph describes about the total value of exports and the value of fuel and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

The line graph describes about the total value of exports and the value of fuel and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. emqp
The line graph describes about the total value of exports and the value of fuel and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. As we can see the value of fuel exports and selected exports delivers a wide range of differences from 2000 to 2005 with respect to million dollars. over the past years, the stability of food from 2000 to 2005 in exports has minor ups and downs yet maintained to keep it under 10, 000 million dollars. although, fuel exports had a massive rise in 2000, there is a gradual fall in upcoming years. as being compared, through the years from 2000 to 2005, the value of fuel exports shown an enormous drop in money. a very improvising and satisfying result had been viewed from the value of manufactured good exports as the value shows the stability in rise and gradually fall during the 2003 yet showed a stable rise in upcoming years. overall, the stable rise and fall of the value of exports had been briefly described.
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exports
and the
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value
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fuel
and manufactured
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goods
exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

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see
the
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value
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fuel
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exports
and selected
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exports
delivers a wide range of differences from 2000 to 2005 with respect to
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million
dollars.

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over
the past years, the stability of food from 2000 to 2005 in
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exports
has minor ups and downs
yet
maintained to
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keep
it under 10, 000 million dollars.
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although
,
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fuel
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exports
had a massive
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rise
in 2000, there is a gradual fall in upcoming years.
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as
being compared
, through the years from 2000 to 2005, the
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value
of
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fuel
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exports
shown an enormous drop in money.
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a
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improvising and satisfying result had
been viewed
from the
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value
of manufactured
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good
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exports
as the
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value
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the stability in
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and
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fall during the 2003
yet
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showed
a stable
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rise
in upcoming years.

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overall
, the stable
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rise
and fall of the
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value
of
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exports
had been
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described
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IELTS academic The line graph describes about the total value of exports and the value of fuel and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

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4 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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