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The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory. Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process.

The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory. Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process. Ke7k

There are four main stages in the production of plastic paper clips from this small factory. Two of these stages involve actual preparation of the clips, while the other two consist of quality control before the clips are sent out from the factory to the retailers to be sold to the public. To begin with, molten plastic is poured into three different moulds depending on the colour required; the colours are red, blue and yellow. Once these clips emerge from the moulds a quality control machine checks them for strength. Unsatisfactory clips are rejected. In the third stage in the process the clips are stored by hand into two groups, mixed and single colours. When this stage is complete the groups are checked a second time to ensure that the colour mixtures are divided correctly into single colours and mixed colour batches. Finally, the clips are packed and dispatched to the markets.

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stages
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clips
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small
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stages
 involve actual preparation of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrimshaveprunemowsnipshear
clips
, while the other two Possible agreement error. The noun 'consist' seems to be countable, so consider using: "consists".consists
consist
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before
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clips
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sent
 out from the factory to the retailers to be sold
 to the public.

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begin
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different
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moulds
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colour
 required; the Possible spelling mistake. 'colours' is British English.colors
colours
are red
, blue and yellow. Once these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrimshaveprunemowsnipshear
clips
 emerge from the Possible spelling mistake. 'moulds' is British English.molds
moulds
 a quality control machine This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
checks
 them for strength. Unsatisfactory You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrimshaveprunemowsnipshear
clips
are rejected
. In the third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 in the process the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrimshaveprunemowsnipshear
clips
are stored
 by hand into two groups, mixed and single Possible spelling mistake. 'colours' is British English.colors
colours
. When this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 is complete the groups are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 a second time to ensure that the Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 mixtures are divided
correctly
 into single Possible spelling mistake. 'colours' is British English.colors
colours
 and mixed Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 batches. Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrimshaveprunemowsnipshear
clips
are packed
 and dispatched to the markets. 