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The maps below changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

The diagrams given compare Castellon’s construction in 2000 and itself in these recent days. In general, while the city centre and university remain stable through 2 periods, the rest of the buildings show changes in locations. Additionally, several new architectures were erected to replenish the area. On the north side of the city centre, a new tramline bridges the maintained university and city centre. Noticeably, a forest in the right corner of the first map is replaced by a shopping centre meanwhile the north west side comprises a hall of residence, which is set up from a blank space in 2000. An old train station in the initial diagram disappeared and transformed into a police station located opposite the centre. Lastly, an airport which is still under construction is predicted to be done soon. On the remaining directions of the map, it is neglectable that today, a bike rental scheme is built inside the city centre. Beside an old market in 2000 in a symmetrical way, followed by converting into a redeveloped market and there is a concurrent transformation of a road for transportation to a footpath for walkers only. At the bottom of the maps, 2 below corners which used to be empty, now include a cinema and a place served for bars and pubs.
The diagrams
given
compare
Castellon
’s construction in 2000 and itself in these recent days.

In general
, while the city
centre
and university remain stable through 2 periods, the rest of the buildings
show
changes
in locations.
Additionally
, several new architectures
were erected
to replenish the area.

On the north side of the city
centre
, a new
tramline
bridges the maintained university and city
centre
.
Noticeably
, a forest in the right corner of the
first
map
is replaced
by a shopping
centre
meanwhile the
north west
side comprises a hall of residence, which
is set
up from a blank space in 2000. An
old
train station in the initial diagram disappeared and transformed into a police station located opposite the
centre
.
Lastly
, an airport which is
still
under construction
is predicted
to
be done
soon
.

On the remaining directions of the map, it is
neglectable
that
today
, a bike rental scheme
is built
inside the city
centre
. Beside an
old
market in 2000 in a symmetrical way, followed by converting into a redeveloped market and there is a concurrent transformation of a road for transportation to a footpath for walkers
only
. At the bottom of the maps, 2 below corners which
used
to be empty,
now
include a cinema and a place served for bars and pubs.
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