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The maps below changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

The map gives information about the changes that occurred recently in the Spanish city of Castellon from 2000s to today. It can be seen that this city has been modernized, with a range of new transport, shopping centre and entertainment facilities. There are several improvements to transport facilities. In 2000, the road between port area and city centre served car and other vehicles but now it only allows bike, with bike rental scheme which is introduced in the city centre. The building of a tramline that connects the university with the city centre, and the relocation of the train station, while the police station takes over its original site. In the eastern area, trees were cut down and replaced by a new shopping centre. To the south of the shopping centre, the airport is under constructed until now. On the other side of the city, the hall of residence has been built on an empty land. The old market next to the city centre has been moved to the new covered market, while the old place is become new shops. In the port area, the cinema, bars and clubs have been built for entertainment
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changes
that occurred recently in the Spanish city of
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Castellon
from 2000s to
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today
.

It can be
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seen
that this city has
been modernized
, with a range of
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new
transport, shopping
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centre
and entertainment facilities.

There are several improvements to transport facilities. In 2000, the road between port area and city
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centre
served car and other vehicles
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but
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now
it
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only
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allows
bike, with bike rental scheme which
is introduced
in the city
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centre
. The building of a
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tramline
that connects the university with the city
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centre
, and the relocation of the train station, while the police station takes over its original site. In the eastern area, trees were
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cut
down and replaced by a
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new
shopping
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centre
. To the south of the shopping
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centre
, the airport is under constructed until
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now
. On the other side of the city, the hall of residence has
been built
on an empty land. The
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old
market
next
to the city
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centre
has been
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moved
to the
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new
covered market, while the
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old
place
is become
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new
shops. In the port area, the cinema, bars and clubs have
been built
for
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entertainment
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IELTS academic The maps below changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

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6.0
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