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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989

The chart shows data on the changes of the average prices of houses in 5 different cities in 1990-1995 and 1996-2002 compared to the prices of 1989. Overall, whereas prices of the houses showed a decline in New York, London and Tokyo during 1990 to 1995, the prices increased in Tokyo and London during 1996-2002 compared to the prices of those houses in 1989. According to the line graph, the prices of houses illustrated an increase in Madrid and Frankfurt by around 2-3% while the prices dipped in three cities (New York, Tokyo and London) by 5% to 7% in during 1990 to 1995 compared to prices of houses in 1989. Despite Frankfurt, the average prices rose in 3 cities. While the prices of houses showed a dramatic boom by 11% in Tokyo, the prices climbbed by 5% in New York and the prices increased by 4% in Madrid during the period 1996 to 2002. The prics of houses decreased in Frankfurt
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in 1989. According to the line graph, the
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illustrated an increase in Madrid and Frankfurt by around 2-3% while the
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dipped in three cities (New York, Tokyo and London) by 5% to 7% in during 1990 to 1995 compared to
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in 1989. Despite Frankfurt, the average
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989

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