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the chart show the results of a survey looking at factors were important to 1,000 customers of a major Travel Agency in the UK when choosing a holiday destination in July 2016

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The bar chart shows the proportion of customers’ responses to a survey about vacation reasons in the UK in July 2016. Overall, it is clear that the most popular reason was weather in both age groups. It is also noticeable that the figures for reputation reasons chosen by the 40-60 age group had the least percentage of this period. The percentage of food reason in the younger group at 45 percent is lower than the figures of the 40-60 age group at 72%. People who aged 20 to 40 made up 68 percent of local language and 52 percent of another age group. The significant majority of reason was weather capturing nearly equal at 75 percent in the 20 to 40 age group and 74 percent in another. Futhermore, compared to elderly people figure, the 20-40 age group value was more than 3. 5 times higher in reputation reasons at 66 percent. While the rate of location and cost in the 40-60 age group represented approximately equal at nearly 60 percent, the percentage of people who aged 20 to 40 chose location had nearly doubled those of cost.
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the proportion of customers’ responses to a survey about vacation
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reasons
in the UK in July 2016.

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clear
that the most popular
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reason
was weather in both
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age
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groups
. It is
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reasons
chosen by the 40-60
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age
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group
had the least percentage of this period.

The percentage of food
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reason
in the younger
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group
at 45
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percent
is lower than the figures of the 40-60
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age
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at 72%.
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People
who aged 20 to 40 made up 68
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of local language and 52
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age
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. The significant majority of
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reason
was weather capturing
nearly
equal at 75
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in the 20 to 40
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age
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and 74
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figure, the 20-40
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value was more than 3. 5 times higher in reputation
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at 66
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. While the rate of location and cost in the 40-60
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age
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represented approximately equal at
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who aged 20 to 40 chose location had
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IELTS academic the chart show the results of a survey looking at factors were important to 1, 000 customers of a major Travel Agency in the UK when choosing a holiday destination in July 2016

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188 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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