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The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962,1985 and present).

The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and present). gb6x7
The maps delineate the differentiation between Meadow side village and Wonton, a neighboring town, since 1962 Overall, Meadow's side connected with Wonton and developed more facilities. In 1962, Meadow side and Wonton separated from each other. Wonton was on the east of Meadow's side. Meadow side village had a road passing through the village, while Wonton had a railway flowing through it. 23 years later, in 1985, there had a road across two villages, and Meadow side village constructed more buildings, while Wonton changed nothing. In Meadow side, the village was expanded its area and constructed more facilities, such as a leisure complex was in the east of the town, the housing estate was in the west of the village, and a superstore was located under the housing state. Nowadays, Meadow side village is changed to Meadow side suburbs and connects to Wonton. There has been a change in the middle of suburbs and Wonton and more buildings are built, such as the hotel, the station, and the business park. The hotel is to the north, and the park is to the south, while the station is between the hotel and the park.
The maps delineate the differentiation between
Meadow
side
village
and Wonton, a neighboring town, since 1962

Overall
, Meadow's side connected with Wonton and developed more facilities.

In 1962,
Meadow
side and Wonton separated from each other. Wonton was on the east of Meadow's side.
Meadow
side
village
had a road passing through the
village
, while Wonton had a railway flowing through it.

23 years later, in 1985, there had a road across two
villages
, and
Meadow
side
village
constructed more buildings, while Wonton
changed
nothing. In
Meadow
side, the
village
was expanded
its area and constructed more facilities, such as a leisure complex was in the east of the town, the housing estate was in the west of the
village
, and a superstore
was located
under the housing state.

Nowadays,
Meadow
side
village
is
changed
to
Meadow
side suburbs and connects to Wonton. There has been a
change
in the middle of suburbs and Wonton and more buildings
are built
, such as the hotel, the station, and the business park. The hotel is to the north, and the park is to the south, while the station is between the hotel and the park.
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IELTS academic The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and present).

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