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The line graph indicates the number of people who use means of transport everyday from 1970 to 2030. Cars are the most popular choice which people choose on a daily basic over a period 60 years. In the same period, the number of train users increases gradually. However, the number of commuting by buses falls steadily. In 1970, about 5 million people travel by cars perday while the bus and train were used by about 4 million and 2 million people respectively. In the year 2000, the number of car users climbed to 7 million and the number of commuting rail passengers grew to 3 million. Nevertheless, there was a small drop in using buses to travel. By 2030, the figures for using cas are expected to rise to 9 million, and the number of train users is projected to climbe to nearly 5 million. By contrast, buses are likely to become a less popular choice, with only 3 million daily users.
The line graph indicates the
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from 1970 to 2030. Cars are the most popular choice which
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people
choose on a daily basic over a period 60 years. In the same period, the
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number
of train
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users
increases
gradually
.
However
, the
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number
of commuting by buses falls
steadily
. In 1970, about 5
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million
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people
travel by cars
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perday
while the bus and train were
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used
by about 4
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million
and 2
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million
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people
respectively
. In the year 2000, the
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number
of car
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users
climbed to 7
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million
and the
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number
of commuting rail passengers grew to 3
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million
.
Nevertheless
, there was a
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small
drop in using buses to travel. By 2030, the figures for using
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cas
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expected
to rise to 9
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million
, and the
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of train
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users
is projected
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climbe
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5
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3
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daily
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users
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IELTS academic writing task 1 try my best to attain dream

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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