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The map shows the changes that took place in the Spanish city, Castellon in last 20 years from 2000 till today

The map shows the changes that took place in the Spanish city, Castellon in last 20 years from 2000 till today pX523
The map demonstrate the development took place in the city of Castellon at Spain over last two decades from 2000. Firstly, in 2000 there was a city centre at centre of city, to the north of city centre there was university. Forest had occupied the area east to the university. In the north-west from city centre train station was located, old market was set up south to the train station. There was a road running from west to east at the southern side of city centre. Port was situated at extreme south of city centre. However, today, university has been remained untouched. The forest adjacent to university on east is chopped off and shopping complex has been constructed. On the empty land on south side of the forest there is ongoing project for construction of airport. Bike rental scheme has been introduced in the city centre and new covered market is developed to the east of it. On the west of university, hall of residence has been set up. The train station has been relocated between city centre and university and at that place police station has been established. Old market is replaced by new shops. Tramline is laid connecting university and city centre. The road south to the city centre has been restricted to pedestrians only. Across the pedestrian’s path there is introduction of cinema in wet and bars and clubs to east. Port remained the same over past 20 years. Overall, the development that took place at Castellon, city of Spain is major development which provided more modern facilities to the residence of city.
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the development took place in the city of
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Castellon
at Spain over last two decades from 2000.

Firstly
, in 2000 there was a city
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centre
at
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centre
of city, to the north of city
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centre
there was
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university
. Forest had occupied the area east to the
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university
. In the north-west from city
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centre
train
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station
was located
,
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old
market
was set
up south to the train
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station
. There was a road running from west to east at the southern side of city
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centre
. Port
was situated
at extreme south of city
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centre
.

However
,
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today
,
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university
has
been remained
untouched. The forest adjacent to
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university
on east
is chopped
off and shopping complex has
been constructed
. On the empty land on south side of the forest there is ongoing project for construction of airport. Bike rental scheme has
been introduced
in the city
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centre
and new covered market
is developed
to the east of it. On the west of
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university
, hall of residence has
been set
up. The train
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station
has
been relocated
between city
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centre
and
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university
and at that place police
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station
has
been established
.
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Old
market
is replaced
by new shops.
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Tramline
is laid
connecting
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university
and city
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centre
. The road south to the city
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centre
has
been restricted
to pedestrians
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only
. Across the pedestrian’s path there is introduction of cinema in wet and bars and clubs to east. Port remained the same over past 20 years.

Overall
, the development that took place at
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Castellon
, city of Spain is major development which provided more modern facilities to the residence of city.

IELTS academic The map shows the changes that took place in the Spanish city, Castellon in last 20 years from 2000 till today

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