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The diagram below show the present college and its plan in 2025 for proposed.

The diagram below show the present college and its plan in 2025 for proposed. 8xQ0w

The pictures below illustrate the various changes that will take place within college layout at the present to 2025 in the future. Overall, the most striking changes over the school campus is demolition of huge garden on the north side. Moreover, the car park will be expanded in 2025 with more space for a numerous cars. Obviously, the wider campus space is came from the surrounded footpath at both top and left side. In the future, the college entrance would be moved in the opposite side, which is located in front of the road. The replacement of main gate lead to the change of toilets to the north of the campus. The small older library is moved to larger location in the right of the entrance. The middle room reception is convert to the 2 small classrooms in the right and be moved near to the yard on the entrance path. The lunch area still be remain in the same place; however, there is a new shop is constructed on the top right corner of the campus.

The pictures below illustrate the various This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 that will take place within college layout at the present to 2025 in the future.

Overall
, the most striking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 over the school You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
campus
 is demolition of huge garden on the north side. Moreover
, the car park will be expanded
 in 2025 with more space for a numerous Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "car"?car
cars
.

Obviously
, the wider You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
campus
 space is Consider using a past participle here: "come".come
came
 from the surrounded footpath at both top and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side. In the future, the college entrance would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 in the opposite side, which is located
 in front of the road. The replacement of main gate lead to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 of toilets to the north of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
campus
. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 older library is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to larger location in the right of the entrance. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 middle room reception is convert to the 2 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 classrooms in the right and be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 near to the yard on the entrance path. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 lunch area still
 be Consider using a past participle here: "remained".remained
remain
 in the same place; however
, there is a new shop is constructed
The usual prepositions to use with a corner "in" not "on". Did you mean "in the top right corner"?in the top right corner
on the top right corner
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
campus
. 