Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

the chart below shows three different types of deserts around the world\

the chart below shows three different types of deserts around the world\ K0WnN
The tables illustrate the information of three deserts in different continents namely Africa, Asia and North America. Overall, it is clear that the Sahara desert occupies the largest proportion of land compared to two others. In terms of size, the Sahara desert stands at 9, 000, 000 square kilometers, while the Taklimakan and the Great Basin have similar figures, accounting for 270, 000 square kilometers and 305, 775 square kilometers respectively. The average annual rainfall in Taklimakan is from 1 to 3. 8 centimeters every year, which is also the sparsest among the other three. The summer temperature of the Sahara and the Great Basin are the same, with 30 degree celsius, while only Taklimakan desert is at 25 degree celsius. Nonetheless, the Sahara is the warmest in winter with the average temperature of 13 degree celsius, while two others stand at -8 degree celsius and -9 degree celsius. The temperatures of the Sahara and Great Basin desert have the highest records and are similar: 57 and 58. However, the Taklimakan have the lowest extreme temperature recorded: - 26 degree celsius.
The tables illustrate the information of three deserts in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
continents
namely
Africa, Asia and North America.
Overall
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Sahara
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
desert
occupies the largest proportion of land compared to two others.

In terms of size, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Sahara
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
desert
stands at 9, 000, 000 square kilometers, while the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Taklimakan
and the Great Basin have similar figures, accounting for 270, 000 square kilometers and 305, 775 square kilometers
respectively
. The average annual rainfall in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Taklimakan
is from 1 to 3. 8 centimeters every year, which is
also
the sparsest among the other three. The summer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temperature
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Sahara
and the Great Basin are the same, with 30
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
Possible spelling mistake found.
celsius
, while
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
Possible spelling mistake found.
Taklimakan
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
desert
is at 25
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
Possible spelling mistake found.
celsius
. Nonetheless, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Sahara
is the warmest in winter with the average
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temperature
of 13
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
Possible spelling mistake found.
celsius
, while two others stand at -8
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
Possible spelling mistake found.
celsius
and -9
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
Possible spelling mistake found.
celsius
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temperatures
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Sahara
and Great Basin
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
desert
have the highest records and are similar: 57 and 58.
However
, the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Taklimakan
have the lowest extreme
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temperature
recorded:
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
26
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
Possible spelling mistake found.
celsius
.

IELTS academic the chart below shows three different types of deserts around the world\

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
181 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • the chart below shows three different types of deserts around the world\