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This report derives from the bar chart which illustrates the percentage of British residents who donates money to charity over the past twenty decades ( 1990 to 2010 ), explicitly considering the age range.

This report derives from the bar chart which illustrates the percentage of British residents who donates money to charity over the past twenty decades ( 1990 to 2010 ), explicitly considering the age range. K07E1
This report derives from the bar chart which illustrates the percentage of British residents who donates money to charity over the past twenty decades ( 1990 to 2010 ), explicitly considering the age range. Broadly speaking, obviously, the highest number of citizens donates charity for those aged between 36-50 for about 43%, whereas the lowest aged between 18-25, about 17% over 1990. Similarly, the highest amount of British inhabitants funded for the age group between 51-65 of about 36%, However, the least 7% charity funded aged between 18-25 in 2010. Most noticeably of all, it can be seen that in the year 1990, the largest percentage of citizens funded for the age group between 36-50 of about 43%, where the least of 17% provided money for aged between 18-25. Meanwhile, a barely noticeable difference over the percentage of 31% and 32% of residents provide charity aged between 26-35 and above 65 respectively. However, 35% of inhabitants provide charity for the age range between 51-65. Considering the year 2010, most British civilians of about 39% funded for the charity aged between 51-65, whereas the least of 7% contributed for the age group between 18-25. However, a similar percentage of philanthropists of about 35% provided charity for 36-5 and above 65. However, 24% of residents provided charity for the age between 26-35.
This report derives from the bar chart which illustrates the
percentage
of British residents who donates money to
charity
over the past twenty decades
(
1990 to 2010
)
,
explicitly
considering the
age
range.

Broadly
speaking,
obviously
, the highest number of citizens donates
charity
for those
aged
between 36-50 for about 43%, whereas the lowest
aged
between 18-25, about 17% over 1990.
Similarly
, the highest amount of British inhabitants
funded
for the
age
group between 51-65 of about 36%,
However
, the least 7%
charity
funded
aged
between 18-25 in 2010.

Most
noticeably
of all, it can be
seen
that in the year 1990, the largest
percentage
of citizens
funded
for the
age
group between 36-50 of about 43%, where the least of 17% provided money for
aged
between 18-25. Meanwhile, a
barely
noticeable difference over the
percentage
of 31% and 32% of residents provide
charity
aged
between 26-35 and above 65
respectively
.
However
, 35% of inhabitants provide
charity
for the
age
range between 51-65.

Considering the year 2010, most British civilians of about 39%
funded
for the
charity
aged
between 51-65, whereas the least of 7% contributed for the
age
group between 18-25.
However
, a similar
percentage
of philanthropists of about 35% provided
charity
for 36-5 and above 65.

However
, 24% of residents provided
charity
for the
age
between 26-35.
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IELTS academic This report derives from the bar chart which illustrates the percentage of British residents who donates money to charity over the past twenty decades ( 1990 to 2010 ), explicitly considering the age range.

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