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The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. XEbRA
The map shows two proposed locations for a new restaurant in Paris, France. The area stretches by the River Seine is the city centre, featuring a variety of tourist attractions. Both palces are on the area, with one on the north - the Right Bank and the other on the south - the Left Bank. Location 1, on the Right Bank, is near to the Bir-Hakeim Bridge and Metro Station. Next to it has a park and a view of the river with the Eiffle Tower. On the north side of this park is the Maritime Museum which attracts 8000 visitors each day and the Aquarium on the east side of this park attreacts 2000 visitors each day. The proposed restaurant is on the west side of the park, opposite the Sports Centre with 500 visitors per day, so it is easily to walk from this centre to the restaurant. Location 2, on the Left Bank, is between the Eiffel Tower and the Art Gallery. Therefore, the total number of visitors per day to this place is about 16750. The Sports Centre is also close there too, so this place will have a lot of visitors each day with 17250. This location also has a view of the river, a park on the south side and a better view of the Eiffel Tower.
The map
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two proposed locations for a new restaurant in Paris, France. The area stretches by the River Seine is the city
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centre
, featuring a variety of tourist attractions. Both
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palces
are on the area, with one on the north
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the Right Bank and the other on the south
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the
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Left
Bank.

Location 1, on the Right Bank, is near to the
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Bir-Hakeim
Bridge and Metro Station.
Next
to it has a
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park
and a view of the river with the
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Eiffle
Tower. On the north side of this
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park
is the Maritime Museum which attracts 8000
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visitors
each day and the Aquarium on the east side of this
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park
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attreacts
2000
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visitors
each day. The proposed restaurant is on the west side of the
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park
, opposite the Sports
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Centre
with 500
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visitors
per day,
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so
it is
easily
to walk from this
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centre
to the restaurant.

Location 2, on the
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Left
Bank, is between the Eiffel Tower and the Art Gallery.
Therefore
, the total number of
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visitors
per day to this place is about 16750. The Sports
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Centre
is
also
close there too,
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so
this place will have
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a lot of
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visitors
each day with 17250. This location
also
has a view of the river, a
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park
on the south side and a better view of the Eiffel Tower.
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IELTS academic The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
223 words
5.5
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