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The bar chart shows the results of a survey on whether people in England, Scotland, Northern Ireland and Wales stayed in hotels, caravans, campsites or self-catering accommodation when they went on holiday in 2010.

The bar chart shows the results of a survey on whether people in England, Scotland, Northern Ireland and Wales stayed in hotels, caravans, campsites or self-catering accommodation when they went on holiday in 2010. mbrG8
The bar chart compares the proportion of British tourists accommodated in four categories ( hotels, caravans, campsites, and self-catering) in four different countries. Overall, the majority of British visitors in four countries chose to stay in hotels in 2010. 55% of people in the UK preferred to stay in hotels, and this number was slightly higher than that of Scotland, Wales, and Northern Ireland ( approximately 52%, 39%, and 45% respectively). The second prime accommodation that the British chose when going on a holiday in the first three countries was self-catering. The percentages of this category in England, Scotland, and Wales were nearly the same ( around 28% of British visitors). However, Northern Ireland saw a different trend with only over 10% of British tourists opted for self-catering. Turning to the two remaining accommodations, there was a noticeably opposite trend. The proportion of camping was significantly low in Scotland and Wales, merely 5% and 13% respectively. Similarly, camping was chosen by 12% of British each in England and Northern Ireland. On the other hand, while the figures for caravans were merely between 5% and 11% in the first 3 countries, Northern Ireland witnessed a remarkably high percentage (30%).
The bar chart compares the proportion of British tourists accommodated in four categories
(
hotels, caravans, campsites, and self-catering) in four
different
countries
.
Overall
, the majority of British visitors in four
countries
chose to stay in hotels in 2010. 55% of
people
in the UK preferred to stay in hotels, and this number was
slightly
higher than that of Scotland, Wales, and Northern Ireland
(
approximately 52%, 39%, and 45%
respectively
). The second prime accommodation that the British chose when going on a holiday in the
first
three
countries
was self-catering. The percentages of this category in England, Scotland, and Wales were
nearly
the same
(
around 28% of British visitors).
However
, Northern Ireland
saw
a
different
trend with
only
over 10% of British tourists opted for self-catering. Turning to the two remaining accommodations, there was a
noticeably
opposite trend. The proportion of camping was
significantly
low in Scotland and Wales,
merely
5% and 13%
respectively
.
Similarly
, camping
was chosen
by 12% of British each in England and Northern Ireland.
On the other hand
, while the figures for caravans were
merely
between 5% and 11% in the
first
3
countries
, Northern Ireland witnessed a
remarkably
high percentage (30%).
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the results of a survey on whether people in England, Scotland, Northern Ireland and Wales stayed in hotels, caravans, campsites or self-catering accommodation when they went on holiday in 2010.

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