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The pie chart illustrates the information about sources of fish imported to the united state. It is depicted by regarded pictorial representation. The data has been calibrated in dollers.

The pie chart illustrates the information about sources of fish imported to the united state. It is depicted by regarded pictorial representation. The data has been calibrated in dollers. Ba8kX
To begin with, in 1988 sources of fish bought by Canada nation 60%. However, it was bought by other countries almost 27% than the largest decline manifested in China the sale of fish which was merely 13%. Analyzing the rest of data, after four years the maximum retail of fish noticed in other nation which was 46%. Moreover, there had been a dramatic decline noticed in the rate of fish purchased in China nation. In 2000 it was a remarkable increase observed in China nation which was 30%. To sum up, the maximum source of fish imported to the united state and the highest fish resources bought by Canadian nation while, the minimum trend followed by other nations.
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by other countries almost 27% than the largest decline manifested in China the sale of fish which was
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13%. Analyzing the rest of data, after four years the maximum retail of fish noticed in other
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which was 46%.
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in China
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which was 30%. To sum up, the maximum source of fish imported to the united state and the highest fish resources
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bought
by Canadian
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates the information about sources of fish imported to the united state. It is depicted by regarded pictorial representation. The data has been calibrated in dollers.

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