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The percentage of newly graduated students who got a job as an English and French in Ontario teacher every year from 2001 to 2007. -At the beginning, a language or teaching class has a success rate of about 70% in finding a job. Although French teachers are a little less successful with English teachers recruiting for both categories next year by 15% to 55%. -However, In 2003 French teachers started to be more successful in their careers. their job search rather than their English co-teaching their employment rate increased to almost 70% where it was stable with minor changes until 2007 when it rose again to just under 75%.

The percentage of newly
 graduated students who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a job as an English and French in Ontario You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teacher
 every year from 2001 to 2007.

-At the beginning, a language or teaching This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 has a success rate of about 70% in finding a job. Although French You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teachers
 are a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 less successful with English You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teachers
 recruiting for both categories next
 year by 15% to 55%.

-However
, In 2003 French You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teachers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to be more successful in their careers. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTheir
their
 job search rather
 than their English co-teaching their employment rate increased to almost 70% where it was stable with minor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 until 2007 when it rose again to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 75%. 