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Swary's regional on 1920 and 2020.

Swary's regional on 1920 and 2020. NyW0m
The both of this map shows the regional spatial development of Swary's regional on 1920 and 2020. At glance Swary's regional has changed. By the 2020 there are some new business and residence compared with the 1920. However not all business and residence from 1920 remained exist on 2020. Business and residence spatials are changed most compare the public services. On 1920 there are only 6 houses by the time on 2020 there are 5 houses and 3 apartement. Tulebug Bros Cannery that exist on 1920 has replaced by two Yang Office Building. Prestwich Primary School was demolished and then rebuilt as a bigger school, closer to Oak Street’s shops. And Elmwood River gained a bridge and a bike path, the latter of which replaced the small beach seen on the 1920 map.
The both of this map
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shows
the regional spatial development of
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Swary
's regional on 1920 and 2020.

At glance
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Swary
's regional has
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changed
. By the 2020 there are
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some
new business and residence compared with the 1920.
However
not all business and residence from 1920 remained exist on 2020.

Business and residence
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spatials
are
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changed
most compare the public services. On 1920 there are
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only
6
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houses
by the time on 2020 there are 5
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houses
and 3
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apartement
.
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Tulebug
Bros Cannery that exist on 1920 has replaced by two Yang Office Building.

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Prestwich
Primary School
was demolished
and then rebuilt as a bigger school, closer to Oak Street’s shops. And Elmwood River gained a bridge and a bike path, the latter of which replaced the
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small
beach
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seen
on the 1920 map.
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IELTS academic Swary's regional on 1920 and 2020.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
133 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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