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The map showas the Village Park, now and ten years ago. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The map showas the Village Park, now and ten years ago. 62GG

The two maps illustrate changes which have been introduced to the Village Park starting a decade ago going up until present time. Overall, it can be easily observed that the use of empty lands has started being operated by expanding in size and also bike riders have been able to stand the chance of accessing special path to do cycling around their village. 10 years back neither the car park nor the tennis court was as big in size as they are now. The former obtained only 20 cars after which it specalized in 50 in full while the latter was enlarged twice since then. To the south-west of the car park the football pitch reconstructed by a moderate expansion whereas the children's gaming area was reduced to a certain scale to include soft play area right next to it. The remaining have played a vital role in the village's development since the two Pond and a small range of woods were converted into Boating lake and Cafe respectively. Finally in ten years' time two new facilities have been added up. ( toilets in the east and Picnic area in the south-west)

The two maps illustrate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 which have been introduced
 to the Village Park starting a decade ago going up until present time.

Overall
, it can be easily
 observed that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of empty lands has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
being operated
 by expanding in size and also
 bike riders have been able to stand the chance of accessing special path to The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go cycling".go cycling
do cycling
 around their village.

10 years back neither the car park nor the tennis court was as A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.big
big in size
 as they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. The former obtained This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 20 cars after which it Possible spelling mistake found.specialized
specalized
 in 50 in full while the latter was enlarged
 twice since then. To the south-west of the car park the football pitch reconstructed by a moderate expansion whereas the children's gaming area was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to a certain scale to include soft play area right next
 to it.

The remaining have played a vital role in the village's development since the two Pond and a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 range of woods were converted
 into Boating lake and 'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"Café
Cafe
respectively
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 in ten years' time two new facilities have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 up. Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis(
( 
toilets in the east and Picnic area in the south-west)