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the map show Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today.

the map show Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today. XERr8

the two maps show changes to the campus of Colwick Art Centre in 2005 and today. we can see that the centre made many changes during this period, including new buildings. In the past concert hall and cinema were in front of the information desk. Now Central exhibition area is replaced here. Concert hall was moved on the right of the campus. Before there were two galleries. Cinema in the top of the campus. In 2005 there was a snack bar in the top left hand corner of the campus, whereas now two small meeting roomsare there. And new drama studio was built between the cinema and the meeting room1. the old meeting room building now contains gallery. On the left of the information desk there was a toilet, now it was relocated to the right at the concert hall. They also built a new cafe. The centre created a new outdoor exhibition and performance area with a stage instead of the wasteland. A lot of trees planted around it. So, it is clear that centre changed and expanded during this period.

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