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The graphs provide information about number of foreing and domestic students in Australian universities of last ten years. Overall, it can bee seen that enrolment of total local students were high latest years, while enrolment of foreing learners were low. Strating from 2001 total number of students from other countries increased rapdly from 2000 to 8000 in the middle of 2009 and 2020, however number of local students in 2001 were 400000 and this rate steadly increased untile 2007 getting highest point of 600000. By the way, next 4 years this number kept its index. However, numer of commercal overseas students outraced number local students. in 2001 the number of both students were at the same point, but next ten years rate of commercal overseas students steadly increased until 2009, getting highest point. the situnation with local was different, enrolment of commercal local students increasd for 50 % and went flacuated until 2010.
The graphs provide information about
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students
in Australian universities of last ten years.
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enrolment
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local
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were high latest years, while
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enrolment
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foreing
learners were low.

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from 2001 total
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from other countries increased
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from 2000 to 8000 in the middle of 2009 and 2020,
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of
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local
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students
in 2001 were 400000 and this rate
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increased
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untile
2007 getting
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point of 600000. By the way,
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.
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were at the same point,
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overseas
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increased until 2009, getting
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IELTS academic enrollment of Australian students

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153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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