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Crime in the UK last year

Crime in the UK last year LwN66
The graphs illustrate the types of crime happened the last year in the UK which are 4 types: violent crime, property crime, drug crime, and public order crime. Also, it shows the relationship between age and crime. Overall, the most common age for crimes is 20 which represents is the highest crime rate. Moreover, the violent crime is the top type of crime in the last year. In terms of age, between 0 to 8 no crimes were recorded. However, from age 12 and above the crime rate started to increase. Between age 24 and 28 the crimes were decreased by 40 thousands and then started to drop by approx. 1 thousand. The most crime type is violent crime which is almost the half crimes happened the last year. On the other hand, public order crime is 9% which is the least crime type in the UK last year. While property and drug is approximately the same percentage.
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: violent
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, property
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, drug
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is 20 which represents is the highest
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is the top
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In terms of
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is violent
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which is almost the half
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happened the last year.
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, public order
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is 9% which is the least
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in the UK
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IELTS academic Crime in the UK last year

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4 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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