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The line graph exhibits the comparison of the population between two countries India and China since the year 2000, and the anticipated density of the population has also been shown up to 2050.

The line graph exhibits the comparison of the population between two countries India and China since the year 2000, and the anticipated density of the population has also been shown up to 2050. NMJgq
Overall, the two regions experienced different trends in the time period. The population of India rises steadily whereas; the lines show a fall for China over time. In 2000, the total population of India is reported 1 billion, while the figure for China is 1. 25 billion that is approximately 2. 5 times higher than India’s population. Afterward, the lines are delineated the sharp growth for both countries till 2010. As of 2030, a continuous rise for India and a slight curved are observed for China. At that time, the population of both India and China outnumbered 1. 4 billion and the lines reach the same position for these two regions. After 2030, the lines represent the reverse trends for both countries. Regarding India, the population reaches 1. 5 billion, on the other hand for China it remains unchanged and a flat curve appears. From 2040 to 2050, the figure for China is experienced a slight fall but for India, it shows a steady rise. In 2050, both lines reach the culmination point in which India’s population is seen at 1. 6 billion while for China it is seen just down at 1. 4 billion.
Overall
, the two regions experienced
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trends in the time period. The
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population
of India rises
steadily
whereas; the
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lines
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a fall for China over time.

In 2000, the total
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of India
is reported
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, while the figure for China is 1. 25
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billion
that is
approximately 2. 5 times higher than India’s
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population
. Afterward, the
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lines
are delineated
the sharp growth for both countries till 2010. As of 2030, a continuous rise for India and a slight curved
are observed
for China. At that time, the
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population
of both India and China outnumbered 1. 4
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billion
and the
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lines
reach the same position for these two regions.

After 2030, the
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lines
represent the reverse trends for both countries. Regarding India, the
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population
reaches 1. 5
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billion
,
on the other hand
for China it remains unchanged and a flat curve appears. From 2040 to 2050, the figure for China
is experienced
a slight fall
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but
for India, it
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shows
a steady rise. In 2050, both
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reach the culmination point in which India’s
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population
is
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seen
at 1. 6
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billion
while for China it is
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seen
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down at 1. 4
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.

IELTS academic The line graph exhibits the comparison of the population between two countries India and China since the year 2000, and the anticipated density of the population has also been shown up to 2050.

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