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The line graph illustrates the number of arrest per year for utilization of illegal drugs from 1991 to 2005. Overall, it can be seen that, despite some fluctuations, over the period as a whole the levels of arrest dropped drastically over 15 years. To begin with in 1991, the number of arrest stood at 10. However, over the three following years, there was a steady increase to 22 per year. The figure then rose gradually to 50 in 1996. After that the number of arrest kept fluctuating during 1996 to 1999. Next in 2000 the arrest rate saw a peaked at 80, but then there was a dramatic fell down in arrest rate in 2001, in the next year the rate remain stable, and it rose a bit to 20 in 2003. Following this in 2004 and 2005 the arrest rate leveled off.
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per
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for utilization of illegal drugs from 1991 to 2005.
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fluctuations, over the period as a whole the levels of
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dropped
drastically
over 15 years. To
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with in 1991, the number of
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stood at 10.
However
, over the three following years, there was a steady increase to 22 per
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. The figure then rose
gradually
to 50 in 1996.
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fluctuating during 1996 to 1999.
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in 2000 the
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then there was a dramatic fell down in
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in 2001, in the
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the
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remain stable, and it rose a bit to 20 in 2003. Following this in 2004 and 2005 the
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leveled off.
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IELTS academic number of arrest per year

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1 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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