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The map provide information about the changes in the city from the years 1950 and 2021.

The map provide information about the changes in the city from the years 1950 and 2021. Aw1aX
The map provide information about the changes in the city from the years 1950 and 2021. Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that, the housing area significantly increased in all directions. There is an expanding the major roads in southern half-way. In 1950, population in a city is 20, 000 and it has increased too tenfold to 200, 000. The business district has expanded in all directions and the lake is flowing through west to east. There is a bridge upon the lake. Another bridge is present near the dam. Moreover, there is another government building situated in south direction. The airport is double the size located in East. The business district which was confined to the center of the map is now larger and includes the northern and southern shores of the lake. The bridge over the river is now over the lake and there is another bridge near the dam in the east. Finally, there is presently a second government building to the south and the airport located to the east has more than doubled in size.
The map provide information about the
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changes
in the city from the years 1950 and 2021.

Looking from the
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that, the housing area
significantly
increased in all directions. There is an expanding the major roads in southern half-way.

In 1950, population in a city is 20, 000 and it has increased too tenfold to 200, 000. The business district has expanded in all directions and the
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lake
is flowing through west to east. There is a
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bridge
upon the
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lake
. Another
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bridge
is present near the dam.

Moreover
, there is another
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government
building situated in south direction. The airport is double the size located in East. The business district which
was confined
to the center of the map is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
larger and includes the northern and southern shores of the
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lake
.
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The
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bridge
over the river is
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now
over the
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lake
and there is another
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bridge
near the dam in the east.
Finally
, there is
presently
a second
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government
building to the south and the airport located to the east has more than doubled in size.

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