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The diagram below explain the process of making wood pellets, used to heat buildings.

The diagram below explain the process of making wood pellets, used to heat buildings. WmRVb
The process chart reveals the information regarding how wood pellets are made from initial sawdust arrivel to packing, which is used for heat buildings. To commence with, it is evident that the process begins with arrival of sawdust from samill. Moving further, to equal the length in a hammer mill the sawdust is hammered into fibers. Then after, fibers are dampened with steam. Meanwhile, for farming into pellets, the fibers are forced through holes in a pellet machine. Before utilitization of vaccum the loose dust is off. The last but most essential part is packing into which the pellets are packed in 18 killogram (40 pound bags) for futher sale and to deliver it to the market. It is deduced that, the whole process of wood pellets involves in total seven steps, however, it is a complex process.
The
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chart reveals the information regarding how wood
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pellets
are made
from initial sawdust
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arrivel
to packing, which is
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used
for heat buildings.

To commence with, it is evident that the
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process
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begins
with arrival of sawdust from
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samill
. Moving
further
, to equal the length in a hammer mill the sawdust
is hammered
into fibers. Then after, fibers
are dampened
with steam.

Meanwhile, for farming into
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pellets
, the fibers
are forced
through holes in a
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pellet
machine.
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Before
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utilitization
of
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vaccum
the loose dust is off. The last
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but
most essential part is packing into which the
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pellets
are packed
in 18
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killogram
(
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40 pound
bags) for
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futher
sale and to deliver it to the market.

It
is deduced
that, the whole
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process
of wood
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pellets
involves in total seven steps,
however
, it is a complex
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process
.

IELTS academic The diagram below explain the process of making wood pellets, used to heat buildings.

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