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how many people who are infected, deaths and recovered with coronavirus in vietnam from 14th may to 12th june

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this line graph depicts information about how many people who are infected, deaths and recovered with coronavirus in Vietnam from 14th May to 12th June. overall, the number of deaths and recovered almost did not change too much, both of them increased slightly while infected people are increased significantly. looking at the details, all three have different starting points such as mortally started at 35 people meanwhile recovered began about more than 2000 people in 12th May and the number of infected was the highest, it stood at 3816 people at the same time with the other. there was a minimal rise in recovered about 2950 people in the last days of May whilst at the same period with recovered, the number of deaths increased gently too and it stood at more than 40 people. However, the number of infected is differ from another, it increased significantly from about 3816 to more than 7000 people in 31st May then it still shooted up and hit a peak in 12th June at 10137 people. Next, both recovered and motarlly increased significantly but both of them ended different points on 12th June. recovered ended at 3804 people and the last one is deaths it ended just under 60 people.
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with coronavirus in Vietnam from 14th May to 12th June.
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