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The map illustrates Tilden Airport and the surrounding District in 1985 and 2015 Overall, l, the Airport transformed was expanded with new facilities detail, the most significant place is chan Johnson's farm in the North which became a business park turning to the Northeast of the map there is a housing estate Even the geometry of the international in the west of the map and the domestic terminal north of the car park has not changed Some people believe that children at secondary school ought to be streamed according to their ability.

The map illustrates Tilden Airport and the surrounding District in 1985 and 2015 Overall, l, the Airport transformed was expanded with new facilities detail, the most significant place is chan Johnson's farm in the North which became a business park turning to the Northeast of the map there is a housing estate Even the geometry of the international in the west of the map and the domestic terminal north of the car park has not changed Some people believe that children at secondary school ought to be streamed according to their ability. Mr1Pq
The map illustrates Tilden Airport and the surrounding District in 1985 and 2015 Overall, l, the Airport transformed was expanded with new facilities detail, the most significant place is chan Johnson's farm in the North which became a business park turning to the Northeast of the map there is a housing estate Even the geometry of the international in the west of the map and the domestic terminal north of the car park has not changed Some people believe that children at secondary school ought to be streamed according to their ability. In fact, If we have a look at the advantages and disadvantages we will find the opposite!
The map illustrates
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Tilden
Airport and the surrounding District in 1985 and 2015

Overall
, l, the Airport transformed
was expanded
with new facilities

detail, the most significant place is
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chan
Johnson's farm in the North which became a business park turning to the Northeast of the map there is a housing estate

Even the geometry of the international in the west of the map and the domestic terminal north of the car park has not
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believe that children at secondary school ought to
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In fact, If we have a look at the advantages and disadvantages we will find the opposite!
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