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The map illustrates the two supermarkets planned to be built in the town of Garlsdon.

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The map illustrates the two supermarkets planned to be built in the town of Garlsdon. Garlsdon consists of the countryside on in the outmost area of the town. On the southeast side of the city is Cransdon town, which has the inhabitants of 29, 000 people. While on the southwest side of Garlsdon is Bransdon city, which has 15, 000 folks. Next to the countryside area of Garlsdon is the massive housing terrain next to it. The industry area is located on the south and the north of the housing space. Town Centre is sited in the middle of the town. There will be two supermarkets built in Garlsdon. The first terrain will be in the northwest of the town. It will be placed near to the city of Hindon, where it is 12, 000 km away from Garlsdon and it consists of 10, 000 people. The area is in between the main roads and railway, so people will to have an easy access to the supermarket. The other supermarket will be located in the Town Centre. There are two main roads located in between the Town Centre, so that people will park their vehicles away from the second area of the supermarket. However, the railway passes through right on the north side of the supermarket. Both of the supermarkets will have the access to the railway, but the first area of the supermarket has easier more accessible access to the main roads.
The map illustrates the two supermarkets planned to
be built
in the
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town
of
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Garlsdon
.
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Garlsdon
consists of the countryside on in the
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outmost
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area
of the
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town
. On the southeast side of the city is
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Cransdon
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town
, which has the inhabitants of 29, 000
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people
. While on the southwest side of
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Garlsdon
is
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Bransdon
city, which has 15, 000 folks.
Next
to the countryside
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area
of
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Garlsdon
is the massive housing terrain
next
to it. The industry
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area
is located
on the south and the north of the housing space.
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Town
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Centre
is sited
in the middle of the town.

There will be two supermarkets built in
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Garlsdon
. The
first
terrain will be in the northwest of the
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town
. It will
be placed
near to the city of
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Hindon
, where it is 12, 000 km away from
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Garlsdon
and it consists of 10, 000
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people
. The
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area
is in between the main roads and railway,
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so
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people
will to have
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an easy access
to the supermarket. The other supermarket will
be located
in the
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Town
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Centre
. There are two main roads located in between the
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Town
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Centre
,
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so
that
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people
will park their vehicles away from the second
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area
of the supermarket.
However
, the railway passes through right on the north side of the supermarket. Both of the supermarkets will have the access to the railway,
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but
the
first
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area
of the supermarket has easier more accessible access to the main roads.
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IELTS academic The map illustrates the two supermarkets planned to be built in the town of Garlsdon.

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