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The table gives information about underground railway

The table gives information about underground railway Q8D01

The above table illustrates the subway system of sixdifferent countries. Overall, the Tokyo train has the highest passengers per year among the other cities. London has the oldest railway built in the year 1863, while the newest railway is built in the year 2001 in Los Angeles. The kilometers of railway route is different for all cities. The longest railway stretch in terms of kilometers is 394 in city of london and the smallest is in Kyoto that is only 11 kilometers long. The 1927 built Paris railway stretches around 199 Kilometer which is 73 times higher than Washington DC. In the year 2001 the Los Angeles underground railway was built and the kilometer was 28. In terms of top three trains for highest passengers intake per year are Tokyo, Paris and london with 1927 millions, 1191 millions and 775 millions, respectively. The passengers per year in Kyoto are five times less than Los Angeles.

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